Get Over You

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Rockiesfan4ever
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Get Over You

Unread postby Rockiesfan4ever » 16 Jul 2013 15:11

I didn't really think it'd ever come true
So why's it so hard to get over you?
Why can't I get you outta my mind?
I thought you were the one I could not find

I see you face throughout my thoughts
I hear you words throughout my head
I see your smile when I close my eyes
You'll haunt my thoughts till the day I die

I think about you and I sigh
Because you're in my head all day and night
Why'd it have to be this way
Why'd you go and turn away

The clock's ticking down, day by day
Counting the time till I have the nerve to say
Words that are stuck inside my head
Words that I wish I would've said

How I truly feel about you
Why it's so hard to get over you
I should have asked when I had the chance
But I was paralyzed at first glance

I think about you and I sigh
Because you're in my head all day and night
Why'd it have to be this way
Why'd you go and turn away

I see you every other day
But, I just cannot stay away
My mind comes back to you, though I try
You'll haunt my thoughts till the day I die

Nothing can get you from my mind
I hope, eventually, you will find
We, together, are meant to be
Too bad it's imaginary

(Be nice :) )



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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby WonSickPuppy » 16 Jul 2013 17:47

Be nice? It's pretty freaking sweet!


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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby Rockiesfan4ever » 16 Jul 2013 19:37

WonSickPuppy wrote:Be nice? It's pretty freaking sweet!


Thanks a lot. That's what my friends all say but I never feel quite right about my lyrics and idk why. Maybe if I get some more feedback on here I can post some more that I have. It'd give me some motivation to finish some of them.



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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby WonSickPuppy » 16 Jul 2013 20:12

An artist is never satisfied and constantly trying to re-invent themselves and their work. You'll never know unless you share it.


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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby Rockiesfan4ever » 16 Jul 2013 23:03

WonSickPuppy wrote:An artist is never satisfied and constantly trying to re-invent themselves and their work. You'll never know unless you share it.


Fair enough, but I don't want to inundate the forums with too many new threads at once lol



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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby WonSickPuppy » 17 Jul 2013 08:56

I wouldn't worry about that...that what the forum is here for! Maybe just post one or two at a time.


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Re: Get Over You

Unread postby Rockiesfan4ever » 17 Jul 2013 13:15

Ok sounds good. Thanks for the feedback




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