My Writings and stuffs...

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My Writings and stuffs...

Unread postby solacematt » 06 Jul 2008 22:35

I put off doing this for awhile because I feel funny letting people read my stuff. I figure if Serge can muster it up to do it, I'll take a shot :p I'm critical about my lyrical musings and writings, but I feel among friends :smile:

"A Way To Live"

She cried herself to sleep last night
The worst night of her life
I never thought it would happen to her
She got the news but her through a loop
And everyone told her not to cry
Said everything would be alright
And as she stands all alone
Without a doubt I should have known
And as she stands here broken,
I'm feelin her despair
She tells me I can't go on,
And says that I can't live

Now help me find a way to live
Cause I can't find a way tonite
There's nothing left for me I guess I'll run and hide
I'm feelin like a waste tonite
There's nothing left, no peace of mind
There's nothing for me, I guess I'll run and hide
Just say that you'll stay

Stood in the door and said to me, what can I do?
I never said it would be easy now, to lose a friend like you
But everything is changing so damn fast
I can't believe how long it lasts
But what can I do when all that I've got is you
And as she stands here broken
I'm feelin her despair
She tells me I can't go on,
And says that I can't live

Now help me find a way to live
Cause I can't find a way tonite
There's nothing left for me I guess I'll run and hide
I'm feelin like a waste tonite
There's nothing left, no peace of mind
There's nothing for me, I guess I'll run and hide
Just say that you'll stay

Cause I don't think that I can deal with all this pain,
No more,
No

Now help me find a way to live
Cause I can't find a way tonite
There's nothing left for me I guess I'll run and hide
I'm feelin like a waste tonite
There's nothing left, no peace of mind
There's nothing for me, I guess I'll run and hide
There's nothing left for me to hide
Just say that you'll stay



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Re: My Writings and stuffs...

Unread postby Samsung » 17 Jul 2008 14:56

I really like that.

Definitely make that into a song. :D


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Re: My Writings and stuffs...

Unread postby Kara » 28 Jul 2008 18:19

thats some good lryics..


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Re: My Writings and stuffs...

Unread postby Katy » 14 Aug 2008 18:37

I can definitely hear that flow together well in my head. Thanks for sharing!




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