SPWC

This would probably be one of my more "attitude" filled songs if ya would written upon reflection of the sh*t people go through on a daily basis many not voicing any complaint.
Also in the chorus it is said R I P not "rip"

And as always comments, criticism, and suggestions are welcome

Welcome to my world, oh wait you're already here,
I sure as hell wouldn't touch the beer,
cos in this place is every face
that ya thought could be erased

Cos in my world there's pain,
nothing left to gain,
not even deaths sweet release
for there's no eteral peace,
"RIP" what a joke it's enough to make me choke,
cos in my world....there's nothing...

Yea, yea welcome to my world
there's everything im-ag-ined here
even those horrors with-in,
I can't wait to hear you squalling and calling..Out

Cos in my world, there's pain nothing left to gain,
not even deaths sweet release
for there's no eteral peace,
"RIP" what a joke it's enough to make me choke,
cos in my world....there is nothing...

Nothing good nothing bad,
Nothing even so sad,
all alone in this place so much for forgiveness an grace
can you here me don't think so, did you know it'd be so...

Cos in my world there's pain,
not a thing left to gain,
not even deaths sweet release for there's no eteral peace,
"RIP" what a joke it's enough to make me choke, cos in my world....there's nothing...

sounds super awesome! definitely one i think a lot of people could relate to, nice job