Rough Draft!

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Rough Draft!

Unread postby DKrebs » 25 Sep 2012 16:01

Just typed this up about a minute an a half ago, not my best stuff but waddya think for a start?

Wrapped up in chaos' symphony livin in eternity,
forgotten and alone,
depressed and feeling stoned,
you gotta remember you're never alone..
cos

These days everyone's wrapped in cages,
seething with inner rages.
Unsure of what to say, so save me...yea you'll save me..

From despair that which is clenching at my hair,
yea you're there giving me your blank eyed stare
because it wasn't long ago I was lost and feeling alone, but

These days everyone's wrapped in their own cage
lost and alone their own sanity thrown,
leaving me unsure of what to say,
except save me...yea save me, you will save me...


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Re: Rough Draft!

Unread postby chandra » 25 Sep 2012 16:05

:rock:




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Re: Rough Draft!

Unread postby LunaiStar » 27 Sep 2012 08:07

I'm liking this! :)


I've never been one to walk alone, I've always been scared to try. - Sick Puppies, "Maybe"


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Re: Rough Draft!

Unread postby DKrebs » 27 Sep 2012 11:51

Thanks for the support :)
More to come soon, makin final touches on about 4-5 songs


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Favorite Song: Tie between Riptide or Odd One
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