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A guy in my drivers ed class knew I liked to write poetry so he asked me to right a love poem for a girl. Little did I knew she was my best friend. I hope you like it.

What Can I Do?
The sun just smiles
Oh, it can be seen for miles.
I love the way you make me feel
lets make another deal.
I steal your heart and you steal mine,
is this finally my sign?
The music flows from our minds,
your being is my binds.
I'm a pitiful being here alone
my heart broken just like a bone.
How can I breath without you by me,
you were everything, without you I can't see.
I love you too much to breath
but, oh, you've lost me once again.

that sounds awesome

Thanks I'm trying to put it into a song that I'm writing but it keeps making it sound like a ballad...

Good job! Yeah, love songs tend to become a bit mellow. Mellow's nice though