My Rap attempt ( these lyrics do not reflect who i am)

[Dane]

Asphalt Ghost
Do you ever wonder why, you never saw me on the news that day
Face down that’s where you thought I lay
Twenty years is a long time for you to pray
I see your face I took it to my grave

You threw the noose, yes it was red
Bullet in my back and one in my head
Never checked for breathing bitch, thought I was dead
Just a living ghost walking in your head
I knew you brother since we was kids
Scrickity scratch my back that’s the way we lived

Here’s a brand new reality for ya,
I’ve come back a dead legality
A bitter neutrality, a new reality
To take control of my concrete jungle salary
Bullet in the back was an act so cowardly
Put your head on a wall in the thug life gallery

Seeded with a passion, building up yeah up for so very long
Wanting my life,
inters erected by others, now everything’s gone ( inters erected : buried straight up )
That’s not what time is but you’re holding the glory
You think the Youngbloods know the true story
Better have your straps on when you leave your home
Your Buda banged a gong
Clickity clack blap blap your gone

( unfinished)